Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, 10 August 2018

What Respecting People looks like at HHS



W.a.l.t show people what respecting people looks like at Hornby High School.

Monday, 30 July 2018

The Ridge


I could hear the strong waves as I rode against
the rough mountains, struggling to get through.
The bike’s wheels pumping through as best as it could.
Hopping on one wheel the bike just made it over the river.
You could hear the bike thumping hard on the ground,
I could also smell the salt water. I could feel the cold
weather it felt like i was on a cold mountain with basically
no clothing.


The bike was going as fast as a cheetah storming through the wind.
Then suddenly I made it to the beach and to make it there i
needed to go over a fence so i remembered that i have had lots
of experience flipping over fences i remember that to get over
i need to be in a perfect angle and go to it with the right
amount of speed. I rode to it just like I've been taught and
whoosh i just made it over with a thump and a bump then i
made it to the beach with the beautiful ocean ahead.

We are learning to make our writing as interesting as possible by adding what we hear, feel, see and taste and by adding our punctuation is well. 

Friday, 23 March 2018

But how did she get up there?…

But how did she get up there?…

 


One day a girl got a jet pack to go on the skyscraper the girl

saw this mysterious man falling so she caught him the girls

name is actually Emma so this guy got rescued then he

disappeared into this mysterious place she was trying

to find him but no sign of him anywhere she saw a gun

lying on the ground oh no it is dangerous so the man

came back picked up the gun and it was her dad

but her dad pointed the gun at her and fell off again.

Image result for sky tower


Tuesday, 13 March 2018

100 Word Challenge

100 word challenge


One day a boy giant called Bill had a nice drink
of hot chocolate he sat down on his seat and read
the newspaper he had a sip of his drink and
accidentally spilt his drink and it fell into this
strange place called earth what happened was
hot chocolate spilt on all people of earth and
they say the tea cup is still there and people take
millions of photos some read there it can be used
for everyone's imagination anything you dream
can come true sometimes people come to hang out
and eat lunch there.

Friday, 2 June 2017

How to make a new Friend

WALT: How to write an explanation.

Room 8 have learnt the structure of an explanation and have been practicing writing explanations in class.
We wrote about how to make a new friend and then turned it into a presentation to put onto individual blogs. I turned my explanation into a slideshow.


Year 10 Writing Portfolio (English)

For my English Portfolio, I am adding my favourite writing work that I've accomplished this year. My work is getting better over time an...