I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Friday, 10 August 2018
What Respecting People looks like at HHS
W.a.l.t show people what respecting people looks like at Hornby High School.
Monday, 30 July 2018
The Ridge
I could hear the strong waves as I rode against
the rough mountains, struggling to get through.
The bike’s wheels pumping through as best as it could.
Hopping on one wheel the bike just made it over the river.
You could hear the bike thumping hard on the ground,
I could also smell the salt water. I could feel the cold
weather it felt like i was on a cold mountain with basically
no clothing.
The bike was going as fast as a cheetah storming through the wind.
Then suddenly I made it to the beach and to make it there i
needed to go over a fence so i remembered that i have had lots
of experience flipping over fences i remember that to get over
i need to be in a perfect angle and go to it with the right
amount of speed. I rode to it just like I've been taught and
whoosh i just made it over with a thump and a bump then i
made it to the beach with the beautiful ocean ahead.
We are learning to make our writing as interesting as possible by adding what we hear, feel, see and taste and by adding our punctuation is well.
Then suddenly I made it to the beach and to make it there i
needed to go over a fence so i remembered that i have had lots
of experience flipping over fences i remember that to get over
i need to be in a perfect angle and go to it with the right
amount of speed. I rode to it just like I've been taught and
whoosh i just made it over with a thump and a bump then i
made it to the beach with the beautiful ocean ahead.
We are learning to make our writing as interesting as possible by adding what we hear, feel, see and taste and by adding our punctuation is well.
Friday, 23 March 2018
But how did she get up there?…
But how did she get up there?…
One day a girl got a jet pack to go on the skyscraper the girl
saw this mysterious man falling so she caught him the girls
name is actually Emma so this guy got rescued then he
disappeared into this mysterious place she was trying
to find him but no sign of him anywhere she saw a gun
lying on the ground oh no it is dangerous so the man
came back picked up the gun and it was her dad
but her dad pointed the gun at her and fell off again.
Tuesday, 13 March 2018
100 Word Challenge
100 word challenge
One day a boy giant called Bill had a nice drink
of hot chocolate he sat down on his seat and read
the newspaper he had a sip of his drink and
accidentally spilt his drink and it fell into this
strange place called earth what happened was
hot chocolate spilt on all people of earth and
they say the tea cup is still there and people take
millions of photos some read there it can be used
for everyone's imagination anything you dream
can come true sometimes people come to hang out
and eat lunch there.
of hot chocolate he sat down on his seat and read
the newspaper he had a sip of his drink and
accidentally spilt his drink and it fell into this
strange place called earth what happened was
hot chocolate spilt on all people of earth and
they say the tea cup is still there and people take
millions of photos some read there it can be used
for everyone's imagination anything you dream
can come true sometimes people come to hang out
and eat lunch there.
Friday, 2 June 2017
How to make a new Friend
WALT: How to write an explanation.
Room 8 have learnt the structure of an explanation and have been practicing writing explanations in class.
We wrote about how to make a new friend and then turned it into a presentation to put onto individual blogs. I turned my explanation into a slideshow.
Room 8 have learnt the structure of an explanation and have been practicing writing explanations in class.
We wrote about how to make a new friend and then turned it into a presentation to put onto individual blogs. I turned my explanation into a slideshow.
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