I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 6 March 2020
Wonder themes Poster
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Year 10 Writing Portfolio (English)
For my English Portfolio, I am adding my favourite writing work that I've accomplished this year. My work is getting better over time an...
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Kaedun,
ReplyDeleteYou have summarized these three themes clearly, especially the importance of kindness and the theme of popularity. Well done. You are right to point out how lucky Auggie is to have such a supportive family. An idea for next time would to re-word the first sentence so that your meaning links to rest of the paragraph: the parents have learned that a supportive family is important because they both came from split families, for example. Keep up the good work Kaedun.