Wednesday, 28 August 2019

The All Blacks

3 comments:

  1. Hi Kaedun I Really like the way you did your 3 box about the all blacks you have done a great job. Remember to put on some picutre on to your box and remember to put on your full stop. and put on some picutre to look more cool. Good Work Kaedun.

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  2. Hi Kaedun, I like how you presented the drawing about the All Blacks. I learnt a few things about the All Blacks I didn't know but this post teached me a few facts which was helpful. It would be better if you put a few more information to help us know more about the All Blacks, next time try to put a description on your post so we know what the post is about.

    Having a description will enable us to understand about the post, other than that everything is great and I hope you keep up the great work. Good job and hopefully you are having a great day 😄👍.

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  3. Hi,
    Kaedun I really like your blog post about the All blacks that you have done. Maybe next time you could tell us why did you do this and what were you doing with it.

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