100 word challenge
One day a boy giant called Bill had a nice drink
of hot chocolate he sat down on his seat and read
the newspaper he had a sip of his drink and
accidentally spilt his drink and it fell into this
strange place called earth what happened was
hot chocolate spilt on all people of earth and
they say the tea cup is still there and people take
millions of photos some read there it can be used
for everyone's imagination anything you dream
can come true sometimes people come to hang out
and eat lunch there.
of hot chocolate he sat down on his seat and read
the newspaper he had a sip of his drink and
accidentally spilt his drink and it fell into this
strange place called earth what happened was
hot chocolate spilt on all people of earth and
they say the tea cup is still there and people take
millions of photos some read there it can be used
for everyone's imagination anything you dream
can come true sometimes people come to hang out
and eat lunch there.
Good Story Kaedun
ReplyDeleteYou might need to work on describing it a little more etc instead of when you wrote " some say the tea cup is still there" instead you could write " some say the tea cup is still there and it's humongous or it's very colourful" or something otherwise keep up the good work i really like the story.