I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 5 June 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Kaedun,
ReplyDeleteI really like your slide show because it has really good information about how to make a parachute. This reminds me of playing Fortnite and when I jump off the battlebus I use the parachute to make me fly and not be killed straight away.I didn't like the background of Sponge Bob because it was too much and I couldn't understand the writing.
ke te pehea koe? Why did you choose the parachutes?