I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 10 August 2020
Stir Fry
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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I agree with your comments that it could look more appealing. I think it could be more colourful, what vegetables could you put in to make it more colourful?
ReplyDeleteThis was your first dish this term so you have time to make future dishes look, smell and taste more appetizing.
I like the way you rate the dish and also your teams working together out of 10.
I think 6 is a good start. It may not have looked the best stir fry ever made but it all got eaten up!