Wednesday, 30 August 2017

The information of Red

The information of Red

Red is the Fire hydrants that puts out the Fires.
Red is the Ruby that brings back the wires.
Red is the Lava that fills me with Flames.
Red is the Blood that starts getting nicknames.
Red is the Food that shines cherries.

Red is the time when you start seeing Militaries.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Kaedun :)

    This is Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey 2017-2018. I will be blogging with you this summer! I hope you are having a wonderful time with your friends and your family!

    I really like the line "Red is the colour that shines cherries." I love cherries and the colour red! You are a very descriptive and imaginative writer, I hope to read more of your descriptive writings!

    I would really love to start blogging with you! To help you get started with blogging this summer, I have included the link to our Summer Learning Journey activities list.

    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities

    Let's go on the Summer Learning Journey together!

    All the best,

    Jade C.

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