Monday, 14 August 2017

Smashing Suprise

W.A.L.T  write a weather poem using strong verbs.



                          You can not see it.It's out of sight don't go close it's no delight.
                                   You may see it over there that's a sign to be aware
                                            you see rocks falling from the sky soon 
                                                  it's time to say bye bye then it
                                                         landed on the roof but 

                                                                luckily it was 
                                                                     bullet 
                                                                 proof then 
                                                           it stopped coming 
                                                     down the children's frowns
                                                         started coming down.




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1 comment:

  1. nice job keep up the g8 work!!! -kaela hornby high school nz.

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