I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 14 August 2017
Smashing Suprise
You can not see it.It's out of sight don't go close it's no delight.
You may see it over there that's a sign to be aware
you see rocks falling from the sky soon
it's time to say bye bye then it
landed on the roof but
luckily it was
bullet
proof then
it stopped coming
down the children's frowns
started coming down.
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nice job keep up the g8 work!!! -kaela hornby high school nz.
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