I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 29 June 2017
6 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Year 10 Writing Portfolio (English)
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Credit- https://www.newshub.co.nz/home/world/2021/10/german-town--teenager-runs-up-and-down-street-with-lego-gun.html https://sports.yahoo...
Hi Keadun you no me your B.F.F.a second chance is good just like me and you but if you get made at me you will forgive me and if you be made at me I will forgive you. you did the greatest work ever
ReplyDeleteThank you Tama, that is true and thank you for that amazing comment life does give you second chances.
DeleteHi kaedun this is Sanele your best friend. I liked the way you put something that would be useful in life. Because if you do not give a second chance then it would be hard for some people. Something you can add is maybe write something like a story to put under your picture. Besides that I think it looks good bye and have a good day
DeleteIt's me Jimmy Great drawing see you in choir
DeleteHey kaedun My little brother I like how you put this quote in your blog because people needs to give every one a second chance even if they do something that's not perfect you forgive them and believe they can try to do better life is not good with out mistakes.
ReplyDeleteyou're right Kaedun everyone stuffs up sometime in life sometimes more than others it's called "LIFE" anyways It's good people forgive it may not be as easy to forget but least your forgiven right?
ReplyDeleteI have made some really bad mistakes in life and i got forgiven so i'm glad you posted this it'll make people think when they take a look mainly if they're upset and think no one would forgive them.
Life would suck if you never had a second chance luckily life ain't that bad