My winter Friend
One morning I went out to see, a world
of white in front of me. So I rolled up
three balls of snow and stacked them up,
Rounded the sides with a push and a jump. I put on a top hat, a scarf and a face. I named my winter friend and gave him an embrace. I hope that you could stay for a while. Oh snowman, you have made me smile.
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Good work kaedun i liked your gifs an olaf and your poem was superb but i think you should use more vocabulary like (One frosty Monday morning as i arrive outside i see a beautiful winter wonderland in front of me.) or maybe not but i think some vocab would help with your poem
ReplyDeleteThank you Alundra, for that comment and I might add that in my work and improve it to the highest quality I can.
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