I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 24 March 2021
Beatles Perspective
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
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Hi Kaedun, I liked your exquisite blog post. You've written two amazing perspectives for and against the Beatles. Also, you've included an image which interacts the reader. Next time, you should include an introduction to hook in the reader a bit more and make the text in your own words. Anyway, it was an amazing post. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteI'll be waiting for your next post.