Monday, 15 March 2021

Narrative Opening (show don't tell)

Use “show don’t tell” to write 3-5 effective narrative openings. Your narrative could be about absolutely anything, and you don’t have to finish it! Just start… -

I sat on the curb feeling the heat on my face. My mother looked like she was crying behind me. My brother was sitting next to me with a red face; he looked guilty. Our dad was standing and emotionally tearing whilst watching the nice calming house decay. Our family communed on the sidewalk watching as their beloved house burnt into ashes.
- As I sit alone crowded near large skyscraper type buildings, I wait. Waiting for a magical prince to sweep me off my feet, but that isn't the case; the truth is whenever I try to interact everyone pretends like I'm; Invisible. The sad dull world looked awfully big compared to a small teenager like me, I sometimes wonder if I would ever find true love!. - The Dark shivery night hit, as my sister and I stroll outside, we see someone or something blurry in the distance, I cannot recognise it because of the fog; we have a curious look on our faces, as we light our candles and run through the fields and into the forest. As we see the blur we start getting closer and closer; It looks inhuman!. We run away fast while looking back with an exhausted face.

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