Tuesday, 4 February 2020

Apocalyptic Collaborative Writing

Man vs Machine 


1. It was man versing machine in a giant war.


2. It was a terrifying fight with both men and machines fighting their way to victory in a war.


3. It was a terrifying fight with both man and machine they were both fighting their way to victory the fight is like a tiger and a lion having a fight
to the death.


4. It was a humongous fight with both man and machine fighting to the death like a lion would to
claim its place as a pride leader both man and machine were fighting their way to victory.


5. It was a humongous fight in France with both man and machine fighting to
the death like a lion would to claim its place as a pride leader. Lots of tears began
as some soldiers and teammates lost their lives both teams were furious. Side by
side the teams collided and fought their way to victory.

6. A war was ready both men and machines grew their teams to get ready to
collide with the opposite team, and only one team would take the victory. It was
a humongous fight in France with the Eiffle tower barely standing, with both man
and machine fighting to the death like a lion would claim its place as a pride leader. 

Lots of tears began as some soldiers and teammates lost their life.
Both teams were furious and full of anger. Side by side the teams collided
and tried their best to fight their way to victory.



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